What does this sentence suggest about Teresa’s translation?
Read a Literary Passage · ELPAC Grades 11–12 reading. The correct answer, and the reasoning behind it.
A short story or scene, with questions about characters, events and what words mean in context.
Read the passage. Then answer the questions.
What My Father Said
The loan officer had a habit of tapping her pen against the folder whenever she finished a sentence, and by the third tap Teresa had started to dread it.
“Ask your father,” the woman said, “whether the food truck has been profitable for the past twelve months.” Tap.
Teresa turned to her father and put the question into Spanish. He listened with his hands folded on the table, the way he listened to the news on the radio, and then answered at length. The truck had made money every month except the two when the generator broke, and that was the generator’s fault, not his. He had paid back every dollar he had ever borrowed, including the money from his own brother, which was more than his brother could say.
Teresa turned back to the officer. “He says it has been profitable for ten of the last twelve months. The two exceptions were due to an equipment repair.”
It was true. It was also not what he had said. She had left out the brother, and the pride, and the place where his voice rose a little. She had made him sound like a man who filled out forms.
The officer nodded and wrote something down, and the meeting went on that way for twenty minutes: long answers in Spanish, short answers in English, and Teresa in the middle, trimming.
In the parking lot her father unlocked the truck and did not start it.
“Ten of twelve,” he said in English. “Equipment repair.”
Teresa stared at him. In seventeen years she had never heard him put together an English sentence longer than a price.
“I understand more than I say,” he said, in Spanish now. “You did well. You made me sound like a bank.” He turned the key, and the engine coughed and caught. “Next time, leave in my brother. She would have liked that part.”
The question
Choose the best answer.
Read this sentence from the passage: “She had made him sound like a man who filled out forms.” What does this sentence suggest about Teresa’s translation?
- It contained several factual errors.
- It was accurate but removed his personality and feelings.Correct answer
- It made her father sound more successful than he really was.
- It confused the officer about how much money the truck earned.
Why “It was accurate but removed his personality and feelings.” is correct
This tests reading a figurative comparison for what it says about tone rather than facts. A man 'who filled out forms' speaks in flat, official language, and the sentences just before it list what was lost: the brother, the pride, the rising voice. The previous paragraph's 'It was true' rules out any answer about inaccuracy.
Why the other answers are wrong
- It contained several factual errors. — The passage says directly that her translation 'was true'.
- It made her father sound more successful than he really was. — She reports the same ten good months he described; nothing is exaggerated.
- It confused the officer about how much money the truck earned. — The officer simply nods and writes, and the numbers she gave were clear.
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