Which sentence uses the wrong verb tense? (Learning to Fix Bikes)
Read a Student Essay · ELPAC Grades 9–10 reading. The correct answer, and the reasoning behind it.
An essay written as if by a classmate, with numbered sentences. The student finds the sentence containing the error.
Read the essay. Then answer the questions.
Learning to Fix Bikes
- When I was in ninth grade, my uncle gave me an old ten-speed bike that had been sitting in his garage for years.
- The tires were flat, the chain was rusted, and the brakes barely worked.
- I wanted to take it to a repair shop, but the estimate was more than the bike was worth.
- Instead, I started watching repair videos and borrowing tools from a neighbor who used to race.
- Replacing the chain took me an entire weekend, because I kept threading it around the wrong gear.
- The brakes were harder, and I had to adjust the cables three times before they stopped the wheel.
- Last spring, after the bike was finally working, I ride it to school every day for a month.
- Other students started asking me to look at their bikes, so I set up a table outside the cafeteria at lunch.
- Most of the problems turned out to be simple, like a loose seat or a chain that needed oil.
- I learned to explain each repair careful, so that the owner could do it alone the next time.
- This year the student council gave our repair table a small budget for parts.
- I still ride my uncle's old bike, and I am the one my friends call when their brakes squeak.
The question
Choose the best answer.
Which sentence uses the wrong verb tense?
- Sentence 4: “Instead, I started watching repair videos and borrowing tools from a neighbor who used to race.”
- Sentence 7: “Last spring, after the bike was finally working, I ride it to school every day for a month.”Correct answer
- Sentence 9: “Most of the problems turned out to be simple, like a loose seat or a chain that needed oil.”
- Sentence 12: “I still ride my uncle’s old bike, and I am the one my friends call when their brakes squeak.”
Why “Sentence 7: “Last spring, after the bike was finally working, I ride it to school every day for a month.”” is correct
This tests keeping verb tense consistent with a time marker. 'Last spring' and 'was finally working' place sentence 7 in the past, so the verb must be 'rode'; 'ride' is present tense. Sentence 12 is the useful contrast: it also uses 'ride', but 'still' places it in the present, where it is correct.
Why the other answers are wrong
- Sentence 4: “Instead, I started watching repair videos and borrowing tools from a neighbor who used to race.” — 'Started watching' and 'used to race' are both correct past forms for events before now.
- Sentence 9: “Most of the problems turned out to be simple, like a loose seat or a chain that needed oil.” — 'Turned out' and 'needed' are both past tense, matching the time of the repairs.
- Sentence 12: “I still ride my uncle’s old bike, and I am the one my friends call when their brakes squeak.” — 'Still' signals the present, so 'ride' and 'call' are correct here.
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